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    Default Pls review our website

    Hello People,

    Though we are in business for a long time. We created our new site 3 months before. Please review our website regarding design, usability and appeal

    any criticism is appreciated

    GTA LIMO RENTALS

    http://www.gtalimorentals.ca

    Thanks

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    this is quite a nice site. Its nice and clean. I like it.

    Some observations:
    -your footer refers to your service as "cheap & affordable". From a copywriting perspective, I would go with "affordable and competitive" instead. "cheap" is no good and doesn't match the tone of your site.

    -On your facebook like and tweet buttons, I would regenerate the code again from facebook and twitter without the counts since it is not impactful as you currently have just one facebook like and 2 tweets. You can add them back when you get a few more likes & tweets.

    -Most of your text is on extremely light grey backgrounds and the text is a different shade of a darker grey. If you use a darker shade of grey on the text it would be easier to read.
    All-in-one limo software & website solutions www.veloxplatform.com

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    Here is a great site that my friend passed to me. It's about the 8 most common reasons someone will leave a website. Enjoy! http://blog.kissmetrics.com/leave-a-website/?wide=1
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    Charlie

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    Good info CharlieA
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    They grey writing is very hard to read especially on my phone. Also on your services page you have a casino package but you show casinos from las Vegas. Since youre in Toronto that seems weird to me. Why not post a picture of a casino your clients will actually go to? People will realize where that pic is from and if you have a pic from a local casino it will hold more interest. Especially if they heard of it before and always wanted to go.

    It's like posting a photo of a car with plates from England. Just does not seem right.
    Nick Groat
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    Thanks velox and cvclubs for the advice, i will tell my webmaster to modify the site according to your recommendations. Appreciated.

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