View Full Version : Thanks to look my website !!
biglimo
August 13th, 2003, 02:43 AM
Hello All my English is not very good, thank you to look at if all is ok on my website
Phil
http://www.biglimo.be
Michael-Admin
August 13th, 2003, 03:54 AM
VERY NICE!!!! http://limos.com/graemlins/thumbsup.gif
http://www.limos.com/5.0Graphics/proudmembericon.gif
Bourne limousine
August 13th, 2003, 11:42 PM
Nice website http://limos.com/graemlins/thumbsup.gif
Marshall B. Bourn III
LA Limousines (David)
August 15th, 2003, 07:29 AM
Well done, you evidently know your customer.
One thing though, you may want to remove the music, at lot of people surf at work and music makes them shut off a site fairly quickly. At least give a large music mute button.
biglimo
August 15th, 2003, 09:44 PM
Thanks David, but is just a little jingle of 10 second.
TxLimoGuy
August 16th, 2003, 03:12 AM
A couple of grammatical corrections for your English page:
1) Welcome to Biglimo (not 'on')
2) What is a business displacement? Maybe displacement is a mis-translated word...
3) the word 'diffusion' might not be the best choice. What are you trying to say exactly?
4) Suggest your helo page be modifed to: "Our limousine comes to your location, leads you to the aerodrome, awaits you the time of your flight and then takes you back."
5) No need to advertise that your car is a 1999. Looks in good shape - remove the reference to the year of the car.
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by biglimo:
Hello All my English is not very good, thank you to look at if all is ok on my website
Phil
http://www.biglimo.be<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
biglimo
August 16th, 2003, 04:41 AM
Thanks for the exact translate !
LA Limousines (David)
August 16th, 2003, 07:44 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Business or private, with BIGLIMO everything is possible. It might be for a displacement, a ceremony, a more personnel or very specific mission and even as advertising support for your products diffusion. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
Maybe you were thinking:
Business or private, with BIGLIMO anything is possible. Call us for a trip, a wedding, a group outing, or even as advertising support for your product launch.
Alimo
August 21st, 2003, 09:40 AM
Hi, your opening picture could be one of your Limo outside the Atomium (If your proud of your city use the features) you may get a hire from someone who wants to visit that very place and its an unusual site.